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Into the Eyes of the Beholder : A Lost Mind

#2

Hello all, thanks for reading! Hope y'all enjoyed chapter 1. I won't be publishing other chapters since I am planning on publishing all of them as a book. And before anyone asks if this is AI... nope it's not, the story was written by me but I used AI to check for errors, proofreading etc... , but not to write my story. I am not that good at story telling, but I am trying. Any positive feedback would be appreciated. Just a little note — this story is my own creation, so please don’t copy or repost it without asking me.
Give it a like as well to show your support :)

Hello all, thanks for reading! Hope y'all enjoyed chapter 1. I won't be publishing other chapters since I am planning on publishing all of them as a book. And before anyone asks if this is AI... nope it's not, the story was written by me but I used AI to check for errors, proofreading etc... , but not to write my story. I am not that good at story telling, but I am trying. Any positive feedback would be appreciated. Just a little note — this story is my own creation, so please don’t copy or repost it without asking me. Give it a like as well to show your support :)
#4

I also am making a new short book

I also am making a new short book
#5

coool, i liked the touch of real life, human characteristics and even the metaphors like storm and candle
well, it opened my idea of thinking too.. how to describe things and etc important factors. And yeah a person like me who is not good at english lol, i loved it because it was simple, easy and enjoyable.
i liked it :)

coool, i liked the touch of real life, human characteristics and even the metaphors like storm and candle well, it opened my idea of thinking too.. how to describe things and etc important factors. And yeah a person like me who is not good at english lol, i loved it because it was simple, easy and enjoyable. i liked it :)
#6

@Army_Girl_2010 said in #1:

Comments on lichess.org/@/army_girl_2010/blog/into-the-eyes-of-the-beholder--a-lost-mind/FGT12P1k
umm wut???
how/when does she eat???
whose is the house??
me is confuse :)

@Army_Girl_2010 said in #1: > Comments on lichess.org/@/army_girl_2010/blog/into-the-eyes-of-the-beholder--a-lost-mind/FGT12P1k umm wut??? how/when does she eat??? whose is the house?? me is confuse :)
#7

@A0Coolboycolombo said in #6:

umm wut???
how/when does she eat???
whose is the house??
me is confuse :)
nice lol, stay confused :D

@A0Coolboycolombo said in #6: > umm wut??? > how/when does she eat??? > whose is the house?? > me is confuse :) nice lol, stay confused :D
#8

@Army_Girl_2010 said in #7:

nice lol, stay confused :D
Why is Ella holding a bee???

@Army_Girl_2010 said in #7: > nice lol, stay confused :D Why is Ella holding a bee???
#10

@ShanayStar7 said in #3:

Love it!
tysm :)

@JASKIRATSINGH said in #5:

coool, i liked the touch of real life, human characteristics and even the metaphors like storm and candle
well, it opened my idea of thinking too.. how to describe things and etc important factors. And yeah a person like me who is not good at english lol, i loved it because it was simple, easy and enjoyable.
i liked it :)
i liked ur comment as well :D

@EllaDieKrasse said in #9:

I LOVE IT gurllllll
thanx girlie!! much luv ...

@A0Coolboycolombo said in #8:

Why is Ella holding a bee???
where?

@ShanayStar7 said in #3: > Love it! tysm :) @JASKIRATSINGH said in #5: > coool, i liked the touch of real life, human characteristics and even the metaphors like storm and candle > well, it opened my idea of thinking too.. how to describe things and etc important factors. And yeah a person like me who is not good at english lol, i loved it because it was simple, easy and enjoyable. > i liked it :) i liked ur comment as well :D @EllaDieKrasse said in #9: > I LOVE IT gurllllll thanx girlie!! much luv ... @A0Coolboycolombo said in #8: > Why is Ella holding a bee??? where?