I annotated it with my general thoughts. Would appreciate advice from higher ranked players.
Well, on move 8...Nbd7 I think Nc6 world have been better. You're attempting to occupy the hole on d4, and not Block in your LSB. On move 11...Bxc3 I think that it was a bit premature. Those pawns won't come into immediate danger, and the Bishop was much stronger then the Knight.
after Kd1, Ne3 wins the game