I made my first recorded piano improvisation!

Hello everyone! For anyone who is interested in listening to light and quiet piano music, I have recorded my first piano improvisation piece combining multiple other pieces that I like on YouTube! I hope you will have the chance to listen to it; I can make more recordings in the future if people are interested!

Thank you! <3

www.youtube.com/watch?v=IlC_cartebg

It sounds good, but...
There's not a central musical sentence, in it.
You know ? Like the purpose of the song.
It could be:

<< If only... If only... If only I could trust, not only in God.
If only I could trust, not only in money.
If only...
If only a Holy Communion didn't consist of, and exist as...
A coin.
If only a Holy Communion didn't consist of, and exist as...
Entering the Bank, which is a church.
If only the Bank weren't a church.
If only... >>

I agree and thanks! maybe adding rap god and kpop music under it can add a bit of spice to my music and give it a story :)

@WallaceTwo Well done Wallace... I play piano and I absolutely loved this

This sounded like it was done by pro!

Personal opinion:

Audio Quality: Good
Harmony: Questionable
Flow: Superb
Accuracy: 87%
Pitch choice: Not my taste, too high, piano sounds better lower imo, but I know that's the genre
Combination with rain effects: Approved
Emotional: Okay
Creativity: Very good
Chill: Yes
Interesting to Listen to: Yes
Style: Changing too often, a little more legato would be good
My favourite Brilliant Parts: 5:18 - 5:24 and 7:18 - 8:00
Video image: Not ideal
Title: Perfect
Breaks between new parts: Could be a little longer
Blue notes: Could be more, a little more you know like at 7:33 or 10:00 that was good
Effort and in total: Near perfect

Yes please do more! I listed to the whole piece

This is actually really good. I could never do anything like this, probably because I don’t know how to play piano, but this is still really good. Good work.

Ty everyone :) I have another video set to upload in 4 hours or so, its 16 minutes long, I edited it to remove any coughing or noises for the best quality, so I apologize for the small cuts but it shouldn't impact the flow of the piece. Thanks :) I'll send it once it's finished uploading!

@WinOr10PushUps Thanks for this, it really helps with what I need to improve, and I agree that the video image isn't ideal lol xD and I appreciate the near-perfect rating for effort <3 it means a lot!

@WallaceTwo The piano music was amazing, and it with no doubt worked when I was studying. Keep it up!

Amazing music!
Maybe next time, instead of just focusing your camera of your door, you could maybe just put an image to go with the music :)